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Nowadays it is usual that people who plan to study at college need to move to a different city where they come from. For that reason, they need to find out and adapt to how to live in this new city. therefore, some people prefer to live in the university rooms and others in an apartment outside campus. In order to afford the expenses, many people need to find a roommate but you need to choose carefully. because this is the key of a good way for a good living or lives a nigthmare.
first of all, a good roommate needs to be organized. this is a key skill if you do not want to see all their clothes in the living room or the kitchen. For example, I remember when I get my first roommate and he has this problem, he were a really good person but he were a bit lazy. Allways, when he comes home he just take off their jacket and throwing at couch. this were so mean due to if I want to keep the house organiced I need to do doble work.
secondly, he need to pay the rent on time. or in other words a good roommate needs to be puntualn in their responsability. moreover, I am aware that all the people have their struggles with money. but, you do not want to be evicted due to your roommate do not pay the rent. For example, my cousin has this problem once, his roommate lost his job and he were unable to get a new one in three months and the worst thing is his roommate do not tell my cousin until the eviction letter comes.
In conclution, you need to be very carfully in order to choose a good roommate and it is primordial that this person will be organiced and puntual with the payment. this is going to help you to live more calm and focus in your studies.